tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19490962.post4673647310374944607..comments2023-12-10T10:06:41.979+00:00Comments on mutations of mortality: Lynette revisionTerry Hamblinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06346629921055055879noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19490962.post-88351122060786808292010-09-26T00:36:38.025+01:002010-09-26T00:36:38.025+01:00Of the two versions, I'm unable to choose whic...Of the two versions, I'm unable to choose which I prefer; each one has its own strengths. I know very little about the mechanics of writing poetry, but I sense in the first poem the innocent vulnerability of Lynette, which I find very appealing. The shift of perspective from young idealist to thoughtful, experienced medical professional, and patient, was particularly powerful to me. Thank you for sharing another of your gifts.Bonniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06959172107206830466noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19490962.post-25215365007170429192010-09-24T14:06:27.843+01:002010-09-24T14:06:27.843+01:00Very moving. Your gift for writing includes poetr...Very moving. Your gift for writing includes poetry.Gratefulnoreply@blogger.com